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Sunday, 15 March 2015

One day a bear had escaped from the woods so he was walking in to town and he took an alleyway that led to a park and the he went through the park and end up at a road of driveways and so he went down one and the the news helicopter came and was videoing the tiny brown furry bear and there was nothing interesting down there so he came out and it felt weird on his paws and the smell of  rotten garbage and he went down another driveway and a guy was texting and walk and he almost walked into the bear so he ran and dropped his $300 phone as he was running off so he wouldn't get eaten and he was as scared as a rat .  

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